Part 2 Rise of the Market Overlord
As far as my corrections yesterday, they were minor. Just some things for flow. A lot of sentence commas in the wrong place, use this word instead of that word, delete allot of 'then then' or 'as as' in my sentences. I do find a difference in editors at Dog Ear this year. Difference in style. I do find the first editing done on Part 1 was meticulous. It was tough to go through, and they gave a huge amount of advice on flow. This time, there was no advice on the flow of the book. Maybe they understood everything what was going on. I hope so. I will call to see what the change in editors were. He or she did a good job as well. At any rate, the book is now on the fast track. Not much can stop it now, from becoming The Supermarket Guy Part 2: Rise of the Market Overlord. Have a good day, till then..